Storyboard - WIP

It's looking good! How you should draw your storyboard depends on what you want to show - Action, emotion, interaction? For action sometimes it's good to draw rough, don't go into details, draw the main pose so you can get an idea across. Model sheets are for details and final designs. We can be rough and off-model in storyboards. As for this particular set I can tell you that you are great with the action stuff. The poses when she goes back and gets up read clearly! Good job! The only thing that I didn't understand is what this monster did at the end. he came out of the bush happy and then became confused and sad because the girl left, right? Maybe an additional panel would help to solve this problem. And an additional panel for when the girl is about to uncover the bushes would be good too. That's all advice I got for you Is this your personal work? because with personal stuff you are your own director and that's what's cool! You choose how to do your storyboards! Sometimes when you work with other people the director decides how to draw the storyboards. With the film I'm working on the director asked us to draw storyboards like a comics - about 11 small drawings on one page. It's different from one big drawing after big drawing, and it's fun too, but I just got used to drawing storyboards like you do and for my personal project I'm drawing my storyboards one big drawing per page.